Kylan

at the neville family's hayfarm skinny shirtless boy whose skin sucks around his ribcage revealing every line and contour – the ribs stick out like tongues and his arms are ...

Hannah -- Decided you should top me, huh? Kylan can't do it right, so I'll just do it better. :wink: Just kidding. I'm really glad I kindasorta inspired (willed) you ...

rooftop it is time – that minefield of freckles has appeared again across the ridges of your face and my fingers creep across your cheeks like timid soldiers. the smell ...

Jon -- As I'm sure everyone else has pointed out, this poem is exceptionally wordy. This seems to be a poem in which you're attempting to showcase your extensive vocabularly ...

This is over a year old. Please try not to resurrect old stories/poetry unless the author has asked you to. -Kylan *locked*

Cantelope 1 dusk settles in like a pilgrim -- dark, planetary face, a marriage of horizon and constellation. paddies of stars: we wade through them like ricefarmers, harvesting. we pick ...

A/N: So I've decided to make a poetry thread for the poems I write, seeing as I write far too many to be posted individually. You can check up here ...

Conrad -- Hm. Or, as Rorshach would say, hurm . I'm not sure what to make of this piece. I don't think I like it very much. It smacks of ...

Jasmine -- Wonderful. I enjoyed this poem very much. You had a marvelous balance between meaning and language, between showing and telling. I particularly enjoyed your use of imagery, your ...

Thank you all so much! I'm really glad that you all enjoyed it. Just to clear up any questions: the reason for all the blood and carnage is that this ...

Jabbers -- I don't know...I can't really say I'm much of a fan of this poem. It has at least two of the three things I do not like in ...

stairsteps up, each labeled like specimens each promising a new plateau where a name sits, in company of a date of birth, of death, of christening – your life before ...

Galerius -- I've read some of you poetry before. You're very talented when it comes to manipulating words into these sprawling images and concepts. You're very talented at creating certain ...

Thank you lilymoore! I'm glad you enjoyed it! An explanation of the meaning of the name Absalom: Absalom was the son of the old testament King David. Therefore Abel is ...

The charcoal turns her feet black. She walks in the ruins of the old church, scattering the probing flies, the slinktailed coyotes with their pink tongues and their yellow, casted ...