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Re: Yellow
a night at britt gardens and as the evening spins, a party dress of nebula and solar wind, the violin bows sigh on their bed of strings, heaving up like ...
Aug 16, 2009 -
Re: And We Were
June -- This is a fantastic improvement on your usual poetry. I enjoyed it. There's still plenty of room to grow, but I can definately see your poetry maturing here. ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
hospice cold, unpitying sun, dropping in through the windowpanes sullen as a truant, cast-off and browsing. the light is unwelcome company, revealing your face like a well-kept secret, white and ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Elephant Keeper -- pt. 1
Thank you all for your reviews! First, I want to let you all know that this is not, not, not, not, not a sequel to The Elephant Boy. Not. Definately ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Elephant Keeper -- pt. 1
Thanks for your input! The character in the third section is Joseph as a child. I guess I'll just have to mention his name more in the other two sections, ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: An Iron Sea pt. 3
Connie -- Ooh. Nice ending. I enjoyed this, but there wasn't much to it. Both in plot and writing. You and I, as has been said before, have very different ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Elephant Keeper -- pt. 1
They are always watching. I stand among them. Watching me with their soft eyes. Sluffing the ground with their trunks, brushing around me, so close I could reach out and ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
So pretty! -Kylan
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
minesweeping what crops are these? unwilling, slumbering goosebumps, appearing along the red wrist of the road, exposed precious rumps, packed dirt what blossoms will come from these? baby-headed lill
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
For Dems, I have posted piccys of my prom tux. Enjoy. -Kylan
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
the night is full of snails tread carefully – the night is full of snails hobble-backed aborrances, making their slow pilgrimage, on the shoulders of the grassblades small and emerging, ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: thunderstorm
June-- This was a really good, solid effort. I appreciate the personal dimension and you definately have a couple great lines here. Like the opening stanza -- good stuff. One ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
the burning season wildfire in bush canyon today and the sky is doubtful with ash, fluttering like flirting eyelashes. the heat gasps in and lays low over the heavy-lapped valley, ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: 19 bodies and a bag of oranges
An impatient fly tapped against the glass of the door and the old fan spun, struggling against the heat, like a swimmer against a current. I sat behind the counter ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
ghost stories dark staircase leading downwards – an esophagus – and us on the edge, like a nightly prayer, with the moonlight hemming our nightgowns blue and a draft cupping ...
Jul 26, 2009
