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Re: Calvin and Hobbes
I was raised by Calvin and Hobbes. -Kylan
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
behind the waterfall slippery roots, wood spongy and pelted with moss, teaparty of wildflowers on the ridge, wrinkled like noses and the little choir of mistdroplets. waterfall draped down, like ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
A/N: Haven't posted in this for a while, though I've been writing a ton of poetry. Here are a couple new poems. dad's toolshed the rats scramble under the pressboard ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: 2009 YWS Awards Winners!
Psh. Best reviewer of poetry? Really? -Kylan
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: covent garden
and the lamplighters come, one by one, putting their iron nightcaps over the dawdling gaslights, as the morning peels the stars from its back. weathervanes pointing their black, accusatory fingers ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Archives
Gahks -- Unlike Dreamcatcher, I don't think that the word choice is a problem. On the contrary, I think you have several beautiful lines here. The problem, I think, lies ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The Examination of Our Petals
elkpetal -- I enjoyed this very much. I was skeptical at first, mainly because I think you started out a little shaky, but by mid-poem, I was into the groove ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: What musical album has affected your writing most?
The title says it all! Personally, Day & Age , by The Killers takes the cake. Not only has it provided me with countless story ideas, but it contributes a ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
button-nosed I see her everywhere now – under the slate-sloped piano among the baby-footed pedals, laughing at me, her hands flying up like startled birds. she is wrapping herself up ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Hart green, unripe peaches bobbing like Adam's apples above him as he leads us to his front porch, smiling a crooked, sloping smile that cups over his false teeth, his ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Electric Heaven
Gal -- As usual, I like this. Maybe, upon reading a second time, I liked it a little less, but you always manage to deliver poetry that inspires some nice ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Anubis
Thank you both for the critiques (and June, who critiqued this story while YWS was down)! Jiggity -- Yep, he's an old man, and I don't know why you thought ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: Anubis
I sit in the courtyard garden with Tabby in my lap. The tulips are red-headed traitors, bobbing, with bees in their mouths. The water fountain gargles, froths, sputters. Dragonflies land ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: YWS Re-Opens!
I'm not sure if this has been previously addressed, but will custom titles be returning? Another portfolio glitch -- when I click on the button which allows you to view ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: YWS Re-Opens!
I feel like I've stumbled across some paradisaical playground... EDIT: Some quick things I've found that aren't working properly: -- I can't access any of my work from my profile. ...
Aug 23, 2009
