Kylan

These are two separate poems, yes? If that is so, I like the second one better. It's less broken down, not as easily digested as the first. I like it ...

april 1 come what may plantation of teacups, their mutely painted rims, these adorned and simple brides, with their hipped handles carving white light out of the spectrum, as if ...

Last year was a great success for me. Not necessarily were the poems a success, but, instead, the habit that it spawned. Over two hundred poems have come of last ...

the little blue flowers have appeared again, taste-testing, unrolling themselves, like pillbugs in the palm of a very still hand and you can see them through the window in the ...

I plan on it. -Kylan

I don't really care for the badge system, but I think that it would be nice to streamline them...a design a little classier, a là writerscafe.org. Something aesthetically pleasing. -Kylan

and the new day moths flutter like gracenotes, taxidermied by the little pins of evening light, and we still flinch inadvertently at the leftover church sermon, the prayers still chapping ...

This is good. Very apocalyptic, while, at the same time, being grounded on earth, in a relationship between two people. The juxtaposition is nice. You start off strong. Stanza one ...

Mickey, one of the things that I admire most about you is your willingness to experiment with new forms of poetry -- even to the detriment of your own pleasure ...

Hello, This was a good rhyming exercise, and you were definitely able to transport me to a cool, simplified woodland setting. However, I think your meter was a tad off. ...

Interesting. Haikus are difficult to critique, because they are largely personal. Their size lends to a difficulty of mastery, thereby reducing them to scraps that the author will undoubtedly keep ...

Pretty good. Terzanelles have a nice internal metrical sound to them, don't they? I probably won't write one, just because I tend to shy away from rhyming, or structurally constrictive ...

August 25th, 2009 pt 1 green, unripe peaches bobbing like Adam's apples above him as he leads us to his front porch, smiling a crooked, sloping smile that cups over ...

Howler -- A decent effort. Comparing the trials and difficulties of life to a "path through the desert" isn't wholly unoriginal, and so that was refreshing. This is a great ...

Hey Kamas! As requested. My eyes are immediately drawn to the adjectives here. There is a surplus of descriptive words, even by my standards. Some of the adjectives you use ...