Kylan

Hello, Returning the favor. Not bad, but not particularly memorable either. For starters, the nursery song you used is comparable to Psalms 23 in how overused it is in popular ...

For David A. Johnston Looking up at the mountain, he thought about weathermen, and the hot summers of his childhood. How they would predict rain in early August, and he ...

Eh. maybe.

editing

One of my favorite authors, Cormac McCarthy, gives very little description beyond the necessary environmental stuff, at least in certain novels. His most recent one though, The Road, is kind ...

The small dot in Oregon above California is me. :P -Kylan

Hello, Excellently written. And I can honestly say that in my extensive poetry reading, I have not found a poem that denounces poetry, at least not so poetically. I get ...

painted woman your oil paints mixed like feelings on seeing a piece of abstract art – geometric shapes rutting, combusting and rubbed off their edges like bees dying purely for ...

période rose et bleu (or, deserts) ridges in the sand underfoot, wavy, inked with shadows like the lunge of arabic characters. the desert heat is a pueblo dancer with a ...

Wonderful insight, Navita. Just wanted to add a disclaimer about my theme explanation for future readers: any and all other interpretations are welcome. That's what's so great about vignettes, and ...

Thank you so much for your comments both of you! One thing that you both pointed out was the grocery store scene. I thought maybe I'd explain my thinking here. ...

He didn't know what to make of it at first. The crickets slipped. It was nearly sunset, and the sun on the neighbor's strangled clutch of poppies made them look ...

Thanks Gal! at the bronx zoo with grandpa your voice is a river carving a canyon – silty, with shelves of strata, and wearing away at the pueblo sandstone, thrones ...

Hey, I didn't have a problem with the alternating perspectives. Lord knows I've done it enough myself. I've had stories where I've got three different perspectives twining in past, present, ...

A/N: Here's just a little serial of thoughts I have. Little commentaries. I'll continue it in this thread. -- The universe is routine. We have shrunk eternity, popularized galaxies, named ...