Kylan

I thought this was fantastic!! In my opinion much more masterfully done than your prologue! Your style of writing is very intriguing and you rarely tell (a good thing. Something ...

Okay YWS is back and running. But neither my profile pic nor my avatar pic is showing up! Temporary? What's up? -Kylan

Hey! This was pretty good. :D Very orginal. I only have a few tips. Before her lay her ceiling fan along with a sizeable portion of her ceiling that had ...

Two black vans sped down the road; sirens wailing, lights flashing. Houses, signs, and streetlights flickered past like lightning, reflecting off of the vans' tinted windows as they roared in ...

Read a coupla John Grisham novels. They're quick and they're mostly all about lawyers and trials. You can learn alot... But more specifically...You have the main players: the judge, the ...

Read a coupla John Grisham novels. They're quick and they're mostly all about lawyers and trials. You can learn alot... But more specifically...You have the main players: the judge, the ...

Read a coupla John Grisham novels. They're quick and they're mostly all about lawyers and trials. You can learn alot... But more specifically...You have the main players: the judge, the ...

That was great! You really left me hanging there at the end!! You've got a great writing style... I've only a few comments... In the beginning, when you describe the ...

I know what an elk is!!! And I have yet to meet the sorry soul who doesn't... :P Anyways, hello!!! Welcomewelcome. Have fun here. It's a fantastic site... -Kylan PS: ...

I read the unabridged version in seventh grade and considered it my life's greatest accomplishment at the time. It is a fantastic book!! I remember exactly where I was at ...

Hilary Clinton would be a terrible choice for the presidency. Our country would be goin to hell in a hatbox as soon as she finished the inaugural speech... But, on ...

Hey writersdomain!! As always, excellent. You're description and characterization is very real. I've just got a coupla comments... Okay, so why is Creiha having all of these fainting spells??? She ...

Hey writersdomain!! As always, excellent. You're description and characterization is very real. I've got a coupla comments... Okay, so why is Creiha having all of these fainting spells??? She only ...

CHAPTER 2 As soon as the technician pressed the detonation button, the test building fairly vanished. In a violent swarm of wood splinters and steel beams, the building shattered and ...

Hello, JCobsesed!!! Hey, thanks again for critting Pastless. I decided I needed enough people interested in it before I even thought about posting ch. 2... Anyway... I like Skillet and ...