Kylan

DragonWriter should learn to spell, but she is right... -Kylan

TNcowgirl... Just so ya know, no one is on the airplane yet... Yossi is on a different flight in his entry, not 107 (correct me if I'm wrong, sabradan). Flight ...

I agree totally with Trident. Starting a story with a "once upon a time" beginning is just plain boring/immature. I grew up for a reason: no more fairytales! Sad, yes, ...

Please don't think in any way, by any of my posts, that I am anti-american. I love my country. I'm only trying to get into the mind of a terrorist... ...

Well, I just got in major trouble and have been grounded from the computer for an entire month!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: I will, however be able to ...

This is an excellent beginning. Intriguing and promising. I really enjoyed how you parallel the the feelings woman and the girl on the swingset. Clever. But some things were confusing ...

Hey JC! Thanks for your comments so far! To clarify about the unknown terms, however... Pastless is another word for a group - or the whole population - of Clones. ...

This is an excellent beginning. Intriguing and promising. I really enjoyed how you parralled the the feelings woman and the girl on the swingset. Clever. But some things were confusing ...

Yaaaaaaaa~!!! Anime [s]haters[/s] dislikers unite. I'm sorry, I just can't wrap my head around the idea of a grapic novel . Novels should be constructed with words, not with westernized ...

Fantastic! I love your writing style. Very smooth, real, easy to read... You really are able to give insight into your characters mind. You have many profound and true-to-life one ...

Fantastic! I love your writing style. Very smooth, real, easy to read... You really are able to give insight into your characters mind. You have many profound and true-to-life one ...

Thanks Sabradan for telling me about the translation. I'll change it ASAP. I also got rid of my ability to kill off characters... Hope you can help us make this ...

The Setting Time period: current 2007/ City: Boston, Massachusetts/ and later on in the story: American Airlines, Flight 107 (gate 29, Boeing 747, Premium class, first class, and economy, in ...

Hmm... I know Insanity and JC have already mentioned this, but the story was extremely confusing. You kept bouncing from character to character, from point of view to point of ...

Thank you both for reading! And Twit, there is no law that says you can't open a book to the middle and sample an authors writing :D. Hope you two ...