Kylan

One last post before I leave... They bantered playfully. There was no nervousness, no fear, fright. It was a game to them; waving guns around, threatening to shoot and kill ...

I have an idea. In my opinion, this storybook is going to get very pointless very fast. Know why? There is no greater evil that we can all fight against. ...

Rush was sweating. His gun was smoking. The girl was insanely young. Too young to be holding a lighter to a bomb and grinning like the devil himself. His SIG ...

The poem was clearly about my musical endeavers being compared to sex. You made the opposite connection because you wanted to. Well, maybe it was clear to you as the ...

:shock: . I can kiss my virgin eyes goodbye.... Hmmm... Lovely imagery. Good metaphors, similes. However, why would I want to read a poem about sex? It seems to me ...

Fantastic! I love your style and dialogue. It's very real, descriptive, complete. I also liked how you kept with the little "contact" nuance throughout the entire piece. Too often it ...

(This is a re-write I did of the end of the play. Even though it's not my best piece, I think you'll all enjoy it. It's a tad long, but ...

TNCOWGIRL!!!!!!!! Jason is not dead!!!!! He is only wounded!!!!! Didn't you read my entry!!!!!!!??????? It said Jason was shot in the shoulder!!!!!! It was not a lifethreatening wound! !!!!!!!!! -Kyla

(Hey, I found this great site with prison slang A-Z in it. If you guy's want to look up the "slangy" words I use go to ) Rush smirked. His ...

Umm.... Sorry I didn't make this more clear in Alex's profile, cowgirl, but he's not in massachusetts right now. He's in Washington D.C. So... That must be some other senator ...

The smell was sickening. Putrid stenches emanated from the broken, burned, unrecognizable bodies of the citizens of New York. Or at least what was left of them. They were in ...

(A question: How long after the "Nuclear War" does this take place?) Name : Rush Baugh Nickname : Aristocrat Crime : Extortion, Blackmail, Arson, Kidnapping, "Manslaughter". However, Rush was on ...

Contrary to the general negativity of the crits before me, I really enjoyed this! Yeah, there were a few bumpy places but much of it rang true for me! Deep ...

This is my second character... Name: Alex Clevenger Age: 53 Height: 5' 8'' Weight: 200 lbs. Build: Broad shouldered, thick arms, slightly overweight Hair: Brown/flecks of gray Eyes: Blue Nationality: ...

I'm wondering why more people aren't joining... Maybe I did something wrong. Enlightenment, please? 5:10 AM 12:20:00 Smiling softly, Mohammed leaned forward and fished the manila folder containing his