Kylan

I just recieved one of the best crits of my life...courtesy of the CCF. (Read it here .) They were thorough, truthful, covered all their bases, and splattered the right ...

That was amazing CCF! You have just gotten yourself a regular customer. -Kylan

Whoops. No I wasn't. I'm just going to leave now. Disregard what I said... :oops:

8/10 Deep. And very true. Just a question, does that come from the qu'ran or something simliar. The torah?

:wink: I'm guessing you're refering to me, jabber, and your story Scientific Proof. Very wise, insight. I really hope I didn't offend you in any way. Well, actually, I probably ...

I read Of Bees and Strings also, and enjoyed this one more. Not only was it less blunt and obvious, but it was longer and more emotional. Just like Clau ...

This is a critique of chapter 1... Overall Impressions: First of all, don't get rid of the paul/liz dating section. I don't want to dive right into the main plot ...

An aristocratic english gentleman. Black hair, tall, thin, half a days worth of facial hair. Likes to hunt. But hides a sinister background. Maybe he killed someone at one point ...

Okay, first of all, I've got to say this about Shadowsun's crit. In england, people don't use the apostrophe when refering to someones possesion. In the US they do. So ...

Thank you so much!! Hope I can post the rest soon!! -Kylan

Published!

It was fine. Definately a good alternitive next time YWS shuts down... -Kylan

A/N: Old! Turn back! [spoiler]Jaws of steel: Serrated teeth, razor sharp and crunching, Grinding up the earth As a giant grinds man's bones. Long handled mouths, Orifices of black, ever ...

YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally! Thank you much. From what you wrote on the YWS blog though, do you think there's going to have to be a montly fee? Or just more ads? ...

HA! I get the title now! About the Donner party and all! Very, very clever. Since I'm Mormon too, I was looking for an insult or a misconception, but found ...