Kylan

Just wondering what kind of summer jobs/afterschool work everyone here on YWS does. Might be interesting, get to know each other better, da? Anyway, I do secretarial work at a ...

2nd draft = 1st draft - 10%. From Stephen King's, On Writing Good advice. -Kylan

Thanks for the hyperlink, Clau. I read it over and will incorporate it into my ms. Very helpful. Yeah, looking back on the story, I definately need to lay off ...

I've recently written a short story - posted here on YWS - called The Oil Fields Are Burning . It's probably the best piece of fiction I've ever written. Good ...

Published!

1.) I'd like to say I read the whole thing, but in reality, probably only 75% of it all. 2.) No. Never. Go figure. 3.) It would be nice if ...

To me this title sound like a Little-house-on-the-prarie-esque romance novel. A couple in the late 1800s fall in love during the winter. I don't think this is something you would ...

Gagner! -Kylan

War is the only way to get something solved. To get your point across. Don't give me any of this 'peace on earth' crap, because there is no such thing. ...

No, they're not. They're an American "religion" that believe they're part of the children of Israel, I think, although where they dug that up from I don't know. I think ...

Oh, I'm sooooo sorry. :oops: I didn't mean to offend anyone. Lady Pirate I'm very grateful that you even read this piece, let alone comment on it. What you did ...

A thriller. Maybe the main character is being stalked. Kinda Dean Koontzish. Exciting though. I am the hawk

HA! That was pretty good. Swift, to the point, blunt. I especially like the part about hazmat. Very good. Was it inspired by a lift off? End :D . -Kylan

Published!

Why doesn't any one want to crit this? Too long? Not well written? Someone take the time to look this over, please? :( -Kylan