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Re: Young Writers Literary Journal: Coming In Print Soon!
I'm submitting!!!! Can we submit more than one piece? -Kylan
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: The Magicians' Guild
As Maverhov surged from the northern entrance of the compound among his fellow Thieves, a sentry sprinted towards him, clutching his side and panting. The sweat trickling down his face ...
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: Life Expectancy #1
Hey there! Alright. You, my friend, have a problem with info-dumping. In the beginning you chuck a bunch of unimportant details and backstory at us, bogging us down and boring ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: Publish?
So this is an example of the cover letter I'm sending out. It's not exactly what the editors will see but it's close enough : __________________________________________________________________ Obi H.
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: Cirque de Feu
Thanks! You're right. Too many -ing words. I'm off to change 'em. -Kylan
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: The Magicians' Guild
Maverhov strode through the Thieves’ underground concourse, swearing softly to himself and toying with the heavy meat cleaver hanging from a chain at his waist. Magicians. In his city, no ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: Your Influences
Well, in seventh grade, after reading Eragon, I was inspired to write a novel. He was fifteen after all when he started writing. If one kid can do it, any ...
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: Cirque de Feu
This is my response to Trident's Three Pronged Contest . But critiques on the story itself are always appreciated. _________________________________________ A cigarette dangled from the corner of Clau
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: The Country Song
This was funny. The first verse is exactly what country songs are all about. Wife walks out, pet dies, singer grab a beer from the fridge and goes for a ...
Aug 1, 2007 -
Re: The Magicians' Guild
Maverhov watched the pair impassively as they eased their way into his warehouse office, looking as if they were treading on holy ground. Stepping carefully, as if someone had come ...
Jul 31, 2007 -
Re: The Magicians' Guild
Name : Maverhov Patch Race : Human Gender : Male Age : 45 Status : Slum Dweller Appearance : Longish black hair/ pointed gaunt face/ sharp gray eyes History : ...
Jul 30, 2007 -
Re: Harris Beach Photography
Thanks for the comments you guys! You make me feel good :D ... -Kylan
Jul 30, 2007 -
Re: The Runners
What this means is that Runners no longer need a divine blessing, they can occur when very imaginative people create their own imagination personality. Oh. If I remember correctly, in ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: The Runners
Terry watched the man tap the web address into the url bar and frowned. For months now, nearly a year even, Maximillian Montague had been searching. Searching to uncover the ...
Jul 27, 2007 -
Re: The Oil Fields Are Burning (Part 3)
Well, I've edited this portion of TOFAB and posted the alternate ending which turned out to be infineatly better than the ending I had before. If you'd like to track ...
Jul 26, 2007
