Kylan

1: I really don't know what this is a picture of?? It's kinda messy and chaotic (despite there being only one subject). It doesn't do anything for me. 2: The ...

Los Angeles, California “Five,” Booker Lee yelled, pointing the gun at the woman's head, his face stony. “You've got five seconds before your wife dies. And I swear I'll shoot. ...

For some strange reason this title reminds me of a nursery rhyme. Or a jump rope chant or something like that. But I think such a story would be about ...

I'm in control until I get to a point where I'm writing a scene that I haven't planned out. And then the gravity of being able to do anything with ...

You're writing for fun. You're not on a deadline. You have no book contracts, no agents, no outside pressure. If you're not having fun anymore with a story, drop it. ...

That was good! Fun stuff, really. Your writing style is very direct and to the point and you have a way with constructing sentences to inspire just the right emotion. ...

This was good. Not great, but good. You have an excellent voice and your style is extremely unique. It seems like a farce or a satire. It also seems like ...

Oh, I'm so sorry! This was a misunderstanding! I wasn't refering to that particular piece in my last post here, but "Cirque de Feu" which I asked to be critiqued ...

It's been five days and my piece still hasn't been critiqued. Just a reminder... You guys are getting lazy :wink: -Kylan

Tai Po district, Hong Kong Perimeter lights shown like flickering campfires around the house, directed at it's entrances, gateways, and red-brick walls. The shadows they cast loomed; black charcoal st

Really??? That's not good... -Kylan

Can I submit simultaeneous submissions? -Kylan

I work at a law office, so I just snatch a last name from client files. It's kinda fun actually. Choose a first name and then mix and match with ...

He had heard the stories alright. Tales innard splattered walls and charred corpses. Whispered rumors about long, slow, agonizing deaths and gutted Thieves. Arakin was powerful, no doubt about it, ...

I write in the mornings during the summer (9 AM to 11 AM) and during the winter I mainly write in the evenings (4 PM to 7 PM). Since school ...