Kylan

Meh. I only read the first and I didn't like the guy's writing style much. The story was good I suppose... -Kylan

Alright, Sir MM. Here's your critique: Overall Impressions: Your writing style is absolutely delicious. You manage to keep your reader reading and entertained. The sentence structure varies nicely and

Hamburg, Germany Cigarette smoke leaked out of the small bar - blazing with neon lights and beer conglomerates in the hazy nighttime air - as the man opened the door ...

My newest character got a 12. Not bad... -Kylan

This was good! The meter was off in a few places, however. But it's hard to keep track of meter when rhyming, I know. These are some lines I think ...

Earl Kylan the Indefensible of Similar Ealand What the heck is Similar Ealand??? -Earl Kylan :wink:

Twenty-five bucks plus whatever shipping will cost is pretty spendy... Maybe. -Kylan

AUUGGGHHH! So many adjectives! Please, please set aside your thesaurus and cut out some of your twenty-letter descriptive words. They really detract from your story. A.) They make it hard ...

I am largely influenced by action/thriller movies like Mission impossible or the bourne trilogy. -Kylan

Writing is a drug. Like Heroin, Meth, or Coacaine. I am addicted to it. I need it. Therefore, it is apart of my daily routine. Get up, eat breakfast, do ...

I'll try again: Soon I will be allowed a personal title. If you give me the crit, this personal title will read for two weeks: SNOINK IS GOD. -Kylan

First of all, USE THE SPACE BAR! There are numerous places in this piece where two words are joined together by the lack of a space. Read through your story ...

Alright. I see your point, clau. Okay, so that means we'll have to start a list of those people who would be TOTALLY commited to a Novel Challenge. The minimum ...

During the BIG move, I was over at TW browsing the forums. I found - in the 'larger stories' thread - a great idea. Here is a link: I think ...

Everyone's complaining about loosing posts, but I've gained them! Before YWS went down I had about 220 posts. Now I have 240! And I'm not complaining! :wink: Wierd. -Kylan