Kylan

This is the longest, most pivotal chapter yet. Tell me how you like it! ________________________________________ Unanticipated, the evening rain fell in dense curtains, creating puddles in the roads,

You're on my list, Eva... -Kylan

This is my first article as an instructor. It was a response to a question in the usergroup: The Elements of Action Writing. If you find it helpful, let me ...

Excellent, excellent, excellent! This is my kind of poem. Abstract enough to make me work for the meaning, but plain enough for there to be one. Your comparison with the ...

How thoroughly do you describe your characters? Ranging from your MC, to the most insignificent mention of the rabble runnign around in your stories? Do you find yourself describing the ...

Very interesting stuff, gadi! Unique, well described, perfectly intiguing. I do love plagues and pandemics. Very nice. There are only a few places that need a little tweaking: A silent ...

No one wants to meet me :cry: 1.) Magicman 2.) Evangelina 3.) Jabber (a popular one) 4.) Kitty15 5.) Trident 6.) Sabradan 7.) Wrtersdomain 8.) Claudette 9.) Firestarter 10.) Staring_at_ceiling

So there are six yes/maybe's. We need to change those maybe's to yes's and get four more entrants. -Kylan

Both of you are insane. But... Congratulations! :wink: -Kylan

Eva, I have just fallen in love with your story. This is brilliant. Sure, there are a few things to fix here and there, but on the whole the story ...

That song is just plain creepy. It's about vampirism or something. Best song: Miss Murder -Kylan

Wow. This was nice! I enjoyed the structure of the poem and the emotion behind it. You made it just the right length because if the poem was any longer, ...

I took the liberty of spacing out the piece in the crit below. Please space your stories in the future. On to the critique! I'm not sure whether it is ...

I'm writing a novel centered around 'Tongs' - the chinese equivalent of the italian mafia. My main character is an unwilling member of a Tong and soon discovers a massive ...

Thanks Jabber! And yes, your crits ALWAYS help. -Kylan