Kylan

Jabber, I honestly don't know what I would do without you. I feel so embarassed, though, that you had to see all those typos! :oops: I fixed them. And some ...

I have a second generation Ipod Nano... AND I WANT A VID. NANO sooo badly! -Kylan

This was written for a school assignment. We were supposed to write a personal narrative piece of poetry based on the poem "Where I'm From" By Geore Ella Lyons. It's ...

Hey there Jabber! Here's my payback for all of your helpful critiques! I liked this. Your style and characters are very contagious. You manage to both keep me interested and ...

Hey there Jabber! Here's my payback for all of your helpful critiques! :wink: I liked this. Your style and characters are very contagious. You manage to both keep me interested ...

In this chapter, I introduce a new PoV character that will be helping Booker with Tsao and his airport poisoning plan. ____ New York City, New York Mark Stanley sprinted ...

Welcome to YWS This was extremely well written. There is a lot of beautiful imagery and passion in 3.00 which draws a reader into it immediately. The length is good, ...

We don't need to fight back. We need to see what's driving these people to these extremes. We know it can't just be religion; there are way more non-extremists than ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED name: Kylan age: 16 what you write: Action/Adveture short stories and novels// Poetry // Science Fiction // Other what you review: poetry, novels from any genre other ...

Yeah, Myth's got it right. Short stories are written for the plot, novels are written for the characters. Despite this, however, I rarely describe anything about my MCs in mon ...

Bush & Co. didn't help--it made the situation worse. I know. That's what I said.

I think the muslim world and the western world could live in harmony if only the extremists were out of the picture. Everyone knows that only a small portion of ...

This piece was well written, but weak in plot. What was going on? Yeah, I got the general gist, but the power of your writing was severely muffled by your ...

You definitely have a beautiful writing style. Your writing manages to capture an entire scene and drag the reader into it and hold them tight until the very end (how's ...

Yeah. You guys can collaberate on your side of the story. Maybe you can discover the Mafiya's plan and try to thwart it. An opposing strike force, if you know ...