Kylan

I am in desperate need of some FBI nuances. Does anyone here at YWS have a an intimate/semi-intimate knowledge of the bureau? If so, questions will follow. I don't want ...

Okay. Where to begin? Definatley listen to good razor. Slow down. A story is not written for the plot nor the action, but rather for character development. If your readers ...

This is a testimony to the reality of YWS's constant activity. I was gone for 24 hours and 1/3 of the instructors changed to junior mods. How come? -Kylan

This is my contest entry for Sam and co.'s Historical Fiction contest. I need all the help I can get on this! Thanks! _____ -"These are the times that try ...

IF you mean most guys are most guys are raised around the concept of sports and being like that makes them less bookwormish then that totally makes sense, otherwise it ...

Most of my male friends and other guys really don't want to be "smart". They want to be athelitic or apathetic about everything. The cool quota is not caring. Now ...

Brilliant job. I could never, ever draw like that! But as everyone else has said, that is one gender confused looking character. And I've figured out why. His pose and ...

Hello Johnny! So what do you like to write in particular? Hope you can start posting your work soon! (Also, listen the Claudette about the Buddy System. If it had ...

There is a sequel, dear Johnny! Honor is a novel. You can click on my portfolio and find Honor #s 1-7 :wink: . And yes. About the gun. "The man" ...

I wrote for fun as early as age seven. Mostly, the stories had to with aliens or pocket knives of golden guns (yes, I was a violent child :wink: ). ...

Author13, I think you're stereotyping. :wink: -Kylan

A female character. Not to sound chauvenistic or anything. :wink: Yeah, what I meant is that more and more females are becoming the protagonists of novels... -Kylan

I'm not sure if you want to share this or not, Nate... But how many people have submitted pieces to the journal? A lot? Not enough? What's up stat-wise? -Kylan

Yeah, anything teen lit with a lot of pink and bucketfuls of purses/shoes/designer sunglasses sprinkled across the front cover immediatley turns me off. Titles do a lot too. Like "Sisterhood ...

This is incredibly long. Therefore, I will only critique the prologue right now. In the furture, consider splitting your story into seperate posts and posting them a few days apart ...