Kylan

Was that a question Ki? Have you ever ridden a camel? Everyone try to remember to post a question along with your answers. -Kylan

Short and skimpy. You've been around here for a while and you must have learned that you get better responses when you post more than 15 lines as Ms. Razor ...

Ten years, Twenty Eight Days Let's keep this going! -Kylan

I liked how you combined first and second narrative in this piece. I can honestly say that I've never seen anything like it. So kudos to you for writing something ...

I have a proposition. It's obvious that the CCF has suffered lately. No business, no mob. I think you need to find a way to revitalize. Come back bigger and ...

Washington, D.C “You've got nerve, Stanley. A hell of a lot of nerve.” FBI director Jack Romney shook his head, tapping a Camel out of a package of cigarettes, and ...

Okay, I'll go first. Topic of first story/novel : My first story ever??? Wow. Um...That would have to be "The Adventures of Jack Frost" which I wrote when I was ...

Well, it's all moot now. The old banner's back. Someone can lock or delete this thread if they'd like. Sorry Flemzo. :oops: -Kylan

Just when I was getting used to the other YWS banner, we changed it. I think it looks like something some kid would draw while fiddling around in Paint. It's ...

Hey there! Does the title of this thread have anything to do with Reliant K? They've made some good music, fer sure. :wink: Anyways, nice to have you aboard. Check ...

This is an interesting idea. I like the concept, I liked your writing style, but I didn't like how you wrote it. The school reminds me too much of Hogwarts ...

I'll just give you a few pointers on this, since everyone else has done a pretty good job on the details. 1.) Hate can be described through physical reactions. More ...

Wow. That was certaintly shocking. I can't say that you described Samantha's grisly death very well, but it was certaintly a twist on the traditional story. Boy likes girl, boy ...

This is an interesting idea. However, you dump massive amounts of info on the reader. A reader doesn't want to read a history book, they want to read a novel ...

Okay. I was wondering: do they have position ranks like the military? Special Agent? Section Director? Do you know of specific ranks of any kind? Also, I was wondering if ...