Kylan

So... Who's in? What's your story/poem about? Is this the first time publishing? Are you going to buy extra copies of the journal for friends and family, etc., etc.? (Also, ...

Join the Horror writing usergroup: Black Writing or something like that. -Kylan

For a long time, my plan was to go to law school, become a personal injury lawyer, become successful , write in my spare time, tap into that well of ...

Nate, you are leading a revolution. Your name will go down in the books as the man who gave young writers a leg up in the literary world. Thank you. ...

Okay, there are some problems with this piece. There are problems with most fantasy. It's a fact of life. Tolkein set us all up for generations of cliche and repetition. ...

9/10. Butter into to toast... I could immediatley picture it. Scrumptious. Absolutley tasty. However, think of switching the simile to "butter into hot toast", because generally the butter is room ...

Okay, there are some problems with this piece. There are problems with most fantasy. It's a fact of life. Tolkein set us all up for generations of cliche and repetition. ...

Listen to my friend Sureal. Read some other genres, people. War is not always the overarching theme in most stories, much less all stories. Fantasy, yes, has become extremely banal ...

(BTW way, cool nick, really matches with my story), Heh, it's not a nick, it's my legal name, printed on my birth certificate with grade A ink. :wink: Anyway, in ...

This was a good start, but little on the slow side and somewhat cliche/contrived. You're on dangerous ground as it is writing a piece about bounty hunters. I'll follow this ...

To sign up for that "users only granted special access forum" you need to go to the community icon on the top toolbar scroll over it. A drop box should ...

She was bleeding pheromones like a dying soldier fatally wounded, hemorrhaging, exuding attraction by the gallon. The way she walked Seductively, celestially killed them (One down, only God knows how ...

When in doubt, place a piece under a different genre entirely. Make it alternate historical fiction, or something like that. Unless you're writing for a publisher who wants stringent historical ...

Well, if you have two opposing viewpoints, the subject is null and void. That means that, as of so far, you should keep the piece the way it is. But ...

Okay. I can see from this piece that you have a strong grasp on the english language. Maybe too strong a grasp. You were very wordy, your desriptions were heavy ...