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Re: The Priceless Bounty
Hey there Cuni. I just recently noticed your shoutout on my profile. I'm sorry I didn't continue reading this piece, but you made it sound like you didn't really want ...
Nov 26, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Darkness Prologue
Hey there BBB! I'd be glad to crit your NaNo. I took a look at your profile and it seems you've been quite prolific with this story. Good job. The ...
Nov 24, 2007 -
Re: The Descent of Ophiuchus, [1] /P
For the most part, this was superb. Your style was contagious, your characters were down to earth and realistic, and you've paced everything wonderfully. This was an excellent prelude for ...
Nov 23, 2007 -
Re: Acceptance Into the Young Writers Journal
You, my friend Adam, are nothing short of incredible. -Kylan
Nov 23, 2007 -
Re: Vigilante
Hey everyone! Thanks for your comments. I'll have to admit, this was an extremely rough draft. The idea came to me and I just had to jot it down. Some ...
Nov 23, 2007 -
Re: 50,000 words anyone?
Congrats, Clau! I thought your story idea sounded excellent, so I've been tracking your progress for a while. I can't wait to read the entire thing! -Kylan
Nov 23, 2007 -
Re: Vigilante
Thanks you two for taking a look at this. BBB >> That is one of the best compliments I have ever received. Thank you. fishr >> This is actually a ...
Nov 23, 2007 -
Re: Vigilante
(This was really experimental on my part. Tell me if it's any good.) The Mirror Juan Gonzales held the magnum up to the man's face, clenching and unclenching his hands ...
Nov 23, 2007 -
Re: Hypothetically speaking, of course!
I rarely critique for grammar. The most important parts of a story are the characters, the dialogue, the plot, and the style. Grammar, for me, is something you take care ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Acceptance Into the Young Writers Journal
I think you would have only been rejected had you submitted poetry. I know they had a real lack of short stories. That's depressing. How do you know if your ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: The ^<v Game
^ Is right. I had the sudden impulse to do the thriller dance. < Is sitting at work and not filing client information like he should be. v Will be ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Acceptance Into the Young Writers Journal
A new question: has anyone been rejected from the Journal? -Kylan
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Ice Blue Chapter one! (it'll make sense later)
Okay, first of all, no one is going to steal this. For multiple reasons. And don't worry about that here, anyway. YWS is safe. One hundred percent. I had mixed ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Ice Blue Chapter one! (it'll make sense later)
Okay, first of all, no one is going to steal this. For multiple reasons. And don't worry about that here, anyway. YWS is safe. One hundred percent. I had mixed ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Teen Ink
Listen to Amelia. It's a hodgepodge of b-rated stories and poems. The submission process is extremly casual; no query letters, no emailing, no snail mail (you copy and paste your ...
Nov 21, 2007
