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Re: The Decline
One thing I really like to do in my poetry is use "negatives" That way, you imply stuff and still get the imagery, but in a cool round-about way. So, ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Sparkling
I like this. It has really good imagery, which is real important for me. It kinda bothers me though that "this" isn't mentioned until the end. At some points, I ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Expanding
This is my first time posting. I really like criticism, and suggestions. Thanks for reading! I know bubbles can’t stay in water forever, but damn, it feels so good to ...
Sep 14, 2010
