Kyaira

This is a nice poem. It kept me wondering what exactly happened or is happening to the character. It spoke truly of how long it can take for the trials ...

I agree with a few others that there seems to be forced rhyming and an awkward amount of syllables at times. However, there was the perfect amount of detail in ...

This is so true. I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. The rhyming certainly allowed the poem to flow nicely. I'd change the title of the piece to perhaps a ...

Thanks for the critiques guys. You're right Blink that I use too many adjectives. Descriptive writing is one of my strong areas I believe, so I often over amplify my ...

Glowing like a milky orb, the moon douses me in scattered light as I awkwardly slip out the window and into the warm, welcoming night. Cautiously I step forward, peeking ...

I enjoyed the choppy aspect of this poem. It kept the poem up to beat and "matter-of-fact". It doesn't seem to tell the story of a girl that got dumped, ...

Love this. I think the repetitive aspect of this song is appropriate. I heard this song as played by an acoustic guitar with a gentle voice accompanying it, and it ...

I like this poem. It flowed and rhymed nicely, even if the scheme was slightly flawed. I liked how you portrayed the speaker to being superior to the one they ...

Ohh. Hmmm... I'll have to write longer reviews. Thanks!

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Hullo! I'm new to this. I already have a question. I've been trying to earn points to post new stuff, and was told that reviewing gives you points. I've replied ...

This is a really good song -- It definitely describes what it can be like to be unsure if a relationship is simply an addiction or actual love. Good job!

Thanks for the critique Blink. That piece was meant to stoop the reader into questioning, such as, "what type of person is the victim?", "what actually happened to the victim?", ...

I am indeed new as of... about an hour ago. Thanks so much! I wrote that a while ago, actually, but was interested in what people would get from that ...

This speaks to me as well. For those of us who have experienced, and still do experience the addiction of cutting, this writing piece does wonderfully at explaining how cutting ...