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Re: Your Lies
Your Lies Funny when things never change, Even when you say they will. But while your off screwing her, My life is standing still. You tell me that you love ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Third Strike, I'm Out
I like it. Maybe because it does relate to me, and it just spoke out to me. Hahah, when I first started reading it I was all, "Mhm-hm." And then ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Nightmares Prologue
Hello all! And thank you for reviewing! :) Okay, a lot of questions was about if this was a dream or not. Trust me, that will be clear in the ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Saving Her Soul Ch.1
I was totally mesmerized by this. It took all my willpower to stop reading just go go brush my hair! I really like- no... love this piece. The only mistakes ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Evealla looked up into the eyes of the stars that shone down upon her. I absolutely love that sentence. Anyway, overall, it was really good and the person who reviewed ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Nightmares Prologue
The water was cold as I plunged into it. My long black hair floating above me in swirls as I was descending deeper into the darkness. I could see the ...
Mar 26, 2011
