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Re: Nightmares Chapter 1
Shiori jumped up in bed, her forehead glistening with sweat from the nightmare she just had. Breathing heavily, she threw the covers off of her, her midnight black hair tangled ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Influences
Hello! :3 I really like this poem, and the only things that I could nitpick from, others have already pointed them out. But other than the mistakes, this was really ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Twilight *Contains excessive nagging and puke worthyness*
Can I just love you forever? Because this was amazing. xD I LOVED the very last bit. They leave and Edward ends up ripping her to shreds in the car ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Uh.
Hai!! :D I'm Kuyoko, or Jess.. which ever one you wanna call me. xD I'm quite new here, as well, and I already have writers block on the novel that ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi?
Hello!! :D Well, to start off writing a story, just choose which genre you want to write about and then just go for it. Whatever comes to your mind, write ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Love Is
Love is Love is caring without reason, Loving without care, Living with reckless abandon, Never leaving, always there. Love is loving unconditionally, Giving just because, Wanting to make them happy, ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Gossip Halls
Wow. This is really good and when I read this, I thought about the hallways at my school. xD I liked it.
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Turns Into
Oh, my, how I can relate to this. This just like.. poked my heart a few times. I really loved this, good job. :3
May 28, 2011 -
Re: The Fatal Wound
Hellooo! As others have said, this is a really good first attempt at poetry, for it isn't really easy to write poems. This one is just a bit too short ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Something
Heh heh, I liked the ending. xD It made me giggle.
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Deleted for Family
Oh, my sweet baby Jesus. This poem was just fantastic! It almost made me cry.. (which is VERY hard to do). Don't change a THING, because it's amazing the way ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: My Attempt at a Sonnet
I really liked this. I'm not really a poet/sonnet expert, so there was no mistakes that I could find. :3 Good job!
May 28, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
Hahah, I LOVE this! xD It made me giggle a lot, all the while thinking, "This is so truuee!!"
May 28, 2011 -
Re: True Love
This poem made me smile! :3 I reeeaaalllyy liked it. The very last bit with the I whisper I Love You, You look into my eyes and say I know. ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Fall Apart
Awww! I like this poem! :D It was really good. As far as I can tell, the people before me seemed to have gotten everything that I've noticed.
May 28, 2011