Kurt-Ethen-Jarram

Also something that has just occured to me. The line you pick out about the Arcon unit and then say there is no explanation or back story?. Is that sentence ...

Hey Silversun, Thank you for your comments. Even though I welcome all forms of constructive criticism and I would rather someone picked out where i had gone wrong rather than ...

I think this would be better catagorise as lyrical poetry. But i am not saying i didnt like it i did. Ha ha at last one i like. I loved ...

I am sorry to always be the one who has to be sceptical but i am afraid i just dont get it. To me this just seems like a jumble ...

Okay i'm not really sure whats going on here. are the spelling mistakes on purpouse or what?. I am kind of loath to say this is an ammature piece becasue ...

Very interesting subjects. i enjoyed reding this but felt i could not identifie with it, but tht does not mean i did not think it was good. i very much ...

Yeah i agree with the above. It envokes a lot of images but does not directly explain the and thats what i think is really interesting about this poem. Well ...

I would really think that this would perhaps fall under the catagory of lyrical poetry or even lyrics as it's rhyming couplets lean in that direction, even though good insight ...

I'm sorry but it does not really make ny sense. I have read a lot of poms that have this simalar rate of none conclusion. you need to express where ...

Good use of words, but to me only seems half finished. Knock out a couple more stanzas and this will be really good.

Thank you Jas that is helpfull. I think due to my dyspraxia (i use that as a fact not an excuse) that even at twenty one years of age punctuation ...

This is a short poem i wrote a few months ago which I thought i would share with you all. I hope you enjoy it. I remember so well that ...

I am really impressed, I'm not usually that interested in the whole Vampire thing but i really enjoyed this extract. I mostley liked (call me a perv if you will ...

That is one of the reasons i was aprehensive about posting the story on this site. It doesnt actually take place in any earthly setting, Eligan is a place of ...

Seeing as you commented on my post i tought it would take a look at your latest contribution. I must say i have never seen anything written in this way ...