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Grass (working title)
I seek constructive criticism. Be harsh, please! I frankly have no idea what's in my readers' mind upon reading, I don't know what's confusing, what's boring, and what's effective, so ...
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Grass(working title) chapter 2
Chapter 1Legend:"abyss": Aure's equivalent of "hell""heartbeat": Aure's equivalent of a second. Sixty is a minute.“bell”: In towns, the first bell is rung at 6am. Each bell is rung in 2 ...
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Stars
Walking down the street in the shadow of twilight,Looking up and down, left and right,Have you seen all the stars above at night?Long after sunset, above the smog,Above buildings that ...