KristenShea

I really liked this. As a Christian, the title of your poem caught my eye. Overall, I liked your message as well. Something reflective and creative while not straying too ...

"The world had gone from gold to grey in the matter of a couple of years." - Wonderful hook! Got my attention! =) Overall, I liked this. "End of the ...

David Hello, I fell for you Slowly, like a decrescendo - Kristen Camino I looked over and saw her sitting at the table closest to the door, by herself. She ...

I liked this overall, but you have punctuation, grammatical, spelling, and capitalization errors that need to be fixed. Overall, this could use a lot of restructuring and some more thought. ...

First off, I LOVED this piece! Your narrator, in 1st person, is wonderful! I at first didn't like how you just started off by simply stating and telling the facts ...

=) actually, I answer most of your answers in my next chapter! This is just the beginning, meant to "hook" the reader, make them ask questions, and make them want ...

=) thank you!! I'll be sure to do that! and your tips really did help, so thank you so much!!!!! :D

Brooke “She has not yet been born: She is music and word, And therefore the un-torn, fabric of what is stirred.” - Osip Mandelstam - translated by A.S. Kline, Silentium ...