KristaBelle

I like how you show us the wishes of the family, and at the same time, tell us something about how that that family member looks to the speaker. The ...

As KaspynPaxian said, this is a powerful poem. I like how there is so much more than just one emotion that you focus on. It truly sounds like a day ...

I saw that you have already been scolded for the structure, capitalization, and spelling, so I'll not touch those subjects, though I did notice the same things as the previous ...