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Re: Advanced Character Development
Moriah, Courageous - Reckless, two sides of the same coin. Finishes anything she starts, sounds like she could have a good work ethic but is a bit obsessive. Good sense ...
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Re: The Crossover Chapter 1.
Thanks, I joined this site today for just this reason. My English 101 writing skills sucks. I can tell a story but I really need help fixing the sentences into ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Hey Ya'll.
Yeah, they were simple reviews, pet peeves mostly. And coincidentally the same thing. I can't take it when a characters name is used a hundred times in the first chapter. ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: The Crossover Chapter 1.
Prologue There comes a time in every creatures life that life itself, for said creature, ceases to progress any further. This phenomenon is simply called death. I came to terms ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Vermillion Tide - Prologue & Chapter 1
I agree with shadowbox, My own sentence structure is terrible so I tend to over look that, but my biggest problem when I read something is having the characters name ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
Alot has been said that I can't really add to, other than the fact that you use Isadora's name an awful lot, here are just a couple examples. “Can I ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Modern Art Is Rubbish
Yeah, the blank canvas thing sounds like the guy missed his deadline, I don't think many people could show up to work and be considered great for not actually doing ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Hey Ya'll.
Hey Ya'll, (yes I do actually say that.) I'm from Mississippi (United States) and I have a strong country accent, However I'm not a redneck. I found this site on ...
Nov 28, 2008
