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Re: Children of Power
one thing i found odd was CHAPTER 1 He howled with pain, and Rika could faintly taste the iron in his blood on her teeth. taste it on her teeth ...
Mar 23, 2008 -
Re: In The Midst of Chaos- Prologue
Finally, he got his brother to come. The structure of this sentence seems a little annoying to me. Got is not my word of choice. You could say "He forced ...
Oct 20, 2007