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Kortez

  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: A Mystery

    Hello~!

    Jan 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: there was a time when my friends included everyone who smiled back

    Hello~!

    Jan 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Adventures of Robin Brawl: Chapter 1

    Hello, Tay~!

    Jan 8, 2015
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Adam

    Hello~! Well. This is an interesting story that you have written here. I did find a couple of minor errors, but everyone makes mistakes. ;) Let me get this out ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Spiritual Re: A Sweet Game of Suicide

    Hello~! Oh my. This story. I can't even. Perfect. Flawless. Amazing. It was pleasantly spine-chilling to me. I loved every second of reading it. The game was a very clever ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, Humor Re: Bally the Talking Dog: 'The RULES'

    Hello! This story is very... straightforward. I have a few critiques. ^^; First off, when you said, "Number four. No touching anything." That is grammatically wrong. You would add in ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A Look Through

    Hello~! (I'm new here, so if this review is bad, I'm sorry! ^^') Well. This poem is quite interesting. There are only a couple errors I saw. "(With the heart ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The things I'll never be able to tell you

    Hello~! (I'm new to reviewing on this website, though I do have some experience on other websites, so here goes! ;) ) This poem. This poem is awesome. I could ...

    Jan 2, 2015


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