Kobain72

No problem! Fair enough. Your lyics, your rules. Regarding chorus etc. ... yeah I can see that now lol :$ my bad, and don't worry I know the technique. Ok, ...

*Quick note: wrote my review earlier today, but only just been able to post it and upon doing so refreshed this page. So, sorry if my review covers areas everone ...

Thanks for all the reviews! Will have to have a longer edit session than I have time for at the moment with exams looming to sort out pacing, flow etc. ...

Thanks for all the reviews = ) About the title: this song was written after listening to too much Fall Out Boy and that influenced a lot of the writing, ...

Like the others I can't see much to correct in your work but I just wanted to congratulate you on another excellent parody :) so well done and thank you

Very good and equally funny =] Also surprised how well it fits to the original tune, which is probably the most important thing for parodies after being funny (but you've ...