Knusperig

Not bad for your first short story. I liked the idea and the ending was nice, but I agree with the first two reviewers; More description would really add to ...

Thank you for reviewing my work everyone ^.^ I appreciate it. I took some your advice and edited the first part a little bit. I have also added more to ...

The imagery in this piece is amazing. I can see everything. "Huge, silhouetted trees form a lacy skyline around me..." I've never thought of tree tops against the sky as ...

This is chapter one of a Novella I'm writing for school. The title is pending. My instructor told me to just come up with something random until I think of ...

What do you do when you're walking alone? And the only thing beside you is your shadow. When you wish someone out there would find you. These lines reminded me ...

This wasn't too bad, but it could use some improvement. I didn't actually read the whole thing and I apologize for that. It's late and I found your writing style ...

Meep: I knoww! My friends from other schools aren't able to do that either. Alainna: Evidence shows that I will respond to just about anything so you can call me ...

gadi: Hello! Thank you for the welcome ^^ I am doing well and you? I'll probably be addicted by the end of the day. Yupyup. Claudette: I don't write stage ...

My name's Chrissie =] I'm 15 and I live in the 423 part of Tennessee. I go to an arts school where my major is Technical Theater. It's pretty cool. ...