Knurla

Thank you for your great opinion Mel. I wanted to tell you that Sunrise is capitalized because it is a nickname for the one I love. But thank you, I'm ...

You had a good grammar stucture in this, and it reminded me of some of my poems. I really liked it! Not all good poems have to be long poems, ...

This poem did not reach out to me; I didn't understand why you was so tired. But you did a make a good point in stating that you was indeed ...