KnightlyAngel09

Hello again.:) I shall review this edited version.:) First of all, small nitpick: I wink, to let you know your special. I wink, to let you know your just another ...

Let us set our hearts a-flutter, weave a tale of candid lovers; star-crossed, starlit, little stars, rehearsing our pretend parts. Let us play with one another, teach our souls to ...

Hey.:) The thing I liked about your poem is how you put opposites together and told a story by doing that. I think it's a smart idea and can probably ...

Eyes have fooled the heart before with many curious glances; the glances lead to hearts in mouths and flaming fast romances. So quick’s the eye to register a beauty ‘midst ...

Haha. I had a dumb moment. I read 'Skandar Keynes' and pictured Ben Barnes so I was expecting to see Prince Caspian.o_o It took me a few moments to realize ...

Film adaptations of Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion were good.:) Bridget Jones' Diary is a post-modern masterpiece and the movie is really good as well. The Narnia movies are amazing. ...

Well, first of all, kudos for writing in rhyme.:) I think that you got a good rhythm going right up to the last two lines. The poem flowed really well ...

Well, I usually complain about books being far better than their movie counterparts. Harry Potter, A Series of Unfortunate Events and the like are a few examples. I guess the ...

Hey!:) I love this. I've not read a poem that I enjoyed as much as yours in a long time. I love how you used rhyming different here. Putting it ...

That was so good. Intensely so. Your description was amazing. I've seldom read anyone on this site who made such vivid pictures with prose. Your words were heavily descriptive yet ...

A moth died today. The lights went out, so the candles were lit. Unbelievably, the moth headed straight for the flame and was burned to death. In a cruel twist ...

I love it.:) It's a lovely poem that evokes the lonely feeling lots of people get during this season. Trees drip in diamond ice, The stars mimic their glitter. I ...

Hey.:) So, 'tis the season...:) And I think that at one point or another, we've had loved ones who were away this time of the year. So this is for ...

It was really funny. I wasn't offended at all. You did say some bad stuff about women but it was self-deprecating. The recipe to a humorous piece. It was a ...

Hey there!:) I like your idea of 'Anorexia of the soul'. It's a good way to approach a hackneyed topic. There's also a lot of interpretations that can stem from ...