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Re: For My Father
Hello.:) I'm from the Philippines also.:) Now, that being said, I think that the way you used imagery of nature and coupled it with Filipino words gave this poem such ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: If I Were a DC Writer [NOW AVAILABLE ON ITUNES]
Hey.:) I think it's the first time I'll ever comment on one of your works but I've read a couple previously. I really liked the song.:) The piano was absolutely ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: My true love
Hey.:) I think that you're tackling an overdone topic here. The challenge then is to present this love poem in an entirely new way. Otherwise, everything from the concept to ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Parallel: What I didn't learn in math
Remember how in math we learned to add, and I said You + Me
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: A Letter to a Valentine
Why no, I didn’t mean what I said In that worthless piece of— Paper that I folded and scented and sent to you On Valentine’s Day. Of course I didn’t ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Parallel
IT IS? O___O The premise of my poem is ruined. HAHA. I shall look into it, definitely. I get what you mean by this seeming unfinished. Thanks a lot. I ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Parallel
Parallel lines are lines that never intersect. - Calculus for Economists, 2005 I could draw a line through The quadrants of existence, Make formulae that equate You = Me. But, ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Me and You
Hello.:) I think it's a cute poem but I think you can really improve on this. Because, right now, it's just that. A cute poem with a shaky rhyme. Let ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: A Scent-iment on a One Night Stand
You smell like cigarettes and the cheap perfume that keeps you company all night. Your hands shake when you light a fire but I still manage to catch a spark. ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: I lift my heart
I lift my heart, an honest plea; a gift I give, to you—from me, mayhap you shall consider this, as what it is, a fervent wish. And all that now, ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: How sad is the peacock!
I love this poem.:) Your language is great. Your rhyme scheme was lovely. And aside from that this poem had a really great message. I always love poems that give ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Red Ribbons
Hello.:) You reviewed a poem of mine earlier so I'm here to return the favor. Let me first say that this was a really good poem. Your imagery was wonderful, ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: We never were
Hello.:) I absolutely loved this. You were able to write a very emotional piece without making it so over-the-top as to make it indigestible. I really do enjoy stories like ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Hangover
You taste like alcohol and bad decisions, like rockstar lives and hazy dreams; you crack me open like a bottle of beer just to throw me out when I’m empty. ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: No answer :(
Helloooo!:) Welcome to the site.:) So you're not exactly new but I noticed you don't have any reviews yet. Just remember that it's important that you review the works of ...
Jan 13, 2011
