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KnightlyAngel09

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: For My Father

    Hello.:) I'm from the Philippines also.:) Now, that being said, I think that the way you used imagery of nature and coupled it with Filipino words gave this poem such ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: If I Were a DC Writer [NOW AVAILABLE ON ITUNES]

    Hey.:) I think it's the first time I'll ever comment on one of your works but I've read a couple previously. I really liked the song.:) The piano was absolutely ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My true love

    Hey.:) I think that you're tackling an overdone topic here. The challenge then is to present this love poem in an entirely new way. Otherwise, everything from the concept to ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Parallel: What I didn't learn in math

    Remember how in math we learned to add, and I said You + Me

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Letter to a Valentine

    Why no, I didn’t mean what I said In that worthless piece of— Paper that I folded and scented and sent to you On Valentine’s Day. Of course I didn’t ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Parallel

    IT IS? O___O The premise of my poem is ruined. HAHA. I shall look into it, definitely. I get what you mean by this seeming unfinished. Thanks a lot. I ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Parallel

    Parallel lines are lines that never intersect. - Calculus for Economists, 2005 I could draw a line through The quadrants of existence, Make formulae that equate You = Me. But, ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Me and You

    Hello.:) I think it's a cute poem but I think you can really improve on this. Because, right now, it's just that. A cute poem with a shaky rhyme. Let ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Scent-iment on a One Night Stand

    You smell like cigarettes and the cheap perfume that keeps you company all night. Your hands shake when you light a fire but I still manage to catch a spark. ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I lift my heart

    I lift my heart, an honest plea; a gift I give, to you—from me, mayhap you shall consider this, as what it is, a fervent wish. And all that now, ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: How sad is the peacock!

    I love this poem.:) Your language is great. Your rhyme scheme was lovely. And aside from that this poem had a really great message. I always love poems that give ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Red Ribbons

    Hello.:) You reviewed a poem of mine earlier so I'm here to return the favor. Let me first say that this was a really good poem. Your imagery was wonderful, ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: We never were

    Hello.:) I absolutely loved this. You were able to write a very emotional piece without making it so over-the-top as to make it indigestible. I really do enjoy stories like ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hangover

    You taste like alcohol and bad decisions, like rockstar lives and hazy dreams; you crack me open like a bottle of beer just to throw me out when I’m empty. ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: No answer :(

    Helloooo!:) Welcome to the site.:) So you're not exactly new but I noticed you don't have any reviews yet. Just remember that it's important that you review the works of ...

    Jan 13, 2011


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