KnightlyAngel09

Hi Lily!:) If you don't mind and if you've got time, please take a look at this: I'm still really shaky on free verse so I'll need all the help ...

I love Thomas Hardy's poems.:) I also love Robert Burns and I wish I knew someone Scottish so he could read the poems the way they should be read.XD Although, ...

Hello.:) First of all, I really liked this. You said you didn't do poetry that often, well, now that I've read this, I'm hoping you make more. I think you ...

Drainpipe My dear, come in; wipe your muddy boots on our soft white carpet and throw your soaking coat on the floor. You see, I don’t think anyone’s going to ...

Hello.:) I think you're dealing with a heavy topic here and if you simply wanted to convey a message then you did just that. You told a story, and if ...

Hello.:) I agree with the reviewers above me, the rhyme scheme was sloppy. I think though that you tried to use a lot of metaphors in this poem which is ...

Warning signs your date is broke: He tells you to choose a restaurant, but when you suggest some Italian finery, he chokes, tells you vividly (very vividly ) of his ...

Hello.:) I really liked this. The language and metaphors you used were consistent throughout which really made the poem solid. I do think that the rhythm needs work though. However, ...

I'm sure most of you are familiar with Cupid and Psyche's love story. It's one of the few love stories in greek myth that ended happily. Literature of times past ...

Hello. You're new here, aren't you?:) Well, first of all, welcome.:D I'm sure one of the mods will acquaint you with the house rules soon anyway so I won't waste ...

My mother had a collection of porcelain dolls. Dad had gotten them from a trip to China and Mom arranged them on top of the drawers. I was curious about ...

SNOINK. I learned how to do Calculus before I learned how to drive alsooooooo! You're my math soul sister! Anyway, as to the poem, I actually really liked it. I ...

Do I love? I do not know. He kisses me, I cannot show an eagerness to him who loves, I kiss him back ‘tis not enough. No sweetness in that ...

I really, really like this. It had an air of mystery to it that was so refreshing. It had a good flow to it as well and the imagery, particularly ...

Hello.:) Your poetry actually reminds me of Pablo Neruda. Your imagery is as raw and powerful as his. I think that this is different. There's no easily identifiable theme, simply ...