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Re: The Classics and Philosophy thread
I love Jane Austen but I didn't like two of her books, namely Sense and Sensibility and Mansfield Park. I love Persuasion though and Pride and Prejudice and I'm pretty ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Since I can't say Twilight... Main Street by Sinclair Lewis. Or maybe I just had overly high expectations. Or maybe the story just isn't my type. Well, ya can't blame ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Hope For The Hopeless
I think it was great. But the very end, as in the last line seemed out of place to me. Anyway, I think you expressed your emotions and art at ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Never Danced
I'm your best friend but now she is too. Here's where the big problem comes in We are both in love with you The only thing that's different About her ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: The Pain I See
the poem rhymes but it doesn't have rhythm. The words don't flooow. I think the message of your poem is great. It means a lot to the world nowadays since ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: A Sonnet on Life
Before I begin, I understand that a sonnet technically has 14 iambic pentameter lines. I cannot do an iambic pentameter. But I can do 14 lines.:) -------------- And all these! ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Never Alone in Heaven
I'm not afraid of death, And I'm not afraid to live Like tomorrow's never coming. And I have so much to give. Eyebrows knit together, And biting my fingernails. I'm ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: The Light of my Heart
The sun’s radiation Paints the sky With bands of purple and red. And electromagnetism Hisses vengefully As pines and firs Dance in the arctic wind, Swaying in the snow. The ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: to take a sparrow
to take a sparrow, to fly a leaf,(I interpreted this as being able to control your life. Seeing as how leaves just float unknowingly in the wind. So to fly ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: The Music of my Soul
In the corners of my mind And when I dance On my toes, I dance to the cellos And violins That never leave; Forever echoing In the corners of my ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: Imagination.
alright. thank you. I shall be reviewing stuff.:)
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: Imagination.
Smiling at Nothing, Laughing like mad Very happy then suddenly sad Thinking of him, thinking of you Imagining that he loves you Crying at night, staring at stars You stand ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: newbie.:) just wanna say hi.:)
Hello. I'm new here. I just typed in young writers on google and this site came out on the list and I found it interesting. So anyway, hello. I'm Nixie.:) ...
Dec 27, 2008
