KnightlyAngel09

Ah yes. I cannot punctuate even if my life depended on it. Thank you very much for that.:)

yes. The last line was my problem on my first draft as well. But at the moment I couldn't find a way to edit it and still end the way ...

Well, no. It isn't about Pygmalion. I didn't have mythology in mind when I wrote this but come to think of it, it sounds like it was based on Pygmalion. ...

Marvel at my chiseled lips And my haughty, Roman nose. Stare up into my haunted eyes And wonder at my regal pose. Caress my icy, marble skin. Hold onto my ...

Lovely, but your rhyming is a little off in some stanzas but despite that I think the poem still flowed perfectly. It was a great read.:)

You did nothing wrong, yet they show no mercy. They throw brutal strikes against your gentle white skin. What was once the face of my beautiful angel, is now the ...

The blood of life is in the movement, The blood of movement is in the dance. Each shift of an eye tells a story, Woven together in movement's trance. I ...

I love rhyming and you rhyme brilliantly.:) I loved how your poem was vague at the start then clearer at the end. It makes you think for a while then ...

Hey. You're from Singapore! We're neighbors. Well, not really. I'm kinda new here too.:) Anyway, looking forward to seeing your stuff.:)

okay. My post is a little late since the movie was showed a long time ago. But I LOVE THE MOVIE. I think it's the most amazing superhero film ever ...

I'm slightly apprehensive with this one. It is unlike my other poetry. ------ The point, once sharp, Now utterly dull. The blade's cry for battle Now reduced to a lull. ...

Thanks to Suzanne for that. I just wanted to try my hand on a *Sonnet* (a non iambic pentameter sonnet{not a sonnet]) for a bit. Perhaps I should try writing ...

I really liked To Kill a Mockingbird. It was the first Pulitzer Prize winner I ever read. I read it when I was 13 I guess... I LOVED the scene ...

Les Miserables by Victor Hugo. I love the story. I love how he portrays society and certain subject such as justice and morality. I love his characters. His characters are ...

Hello. haha.:)) since someone asked my favorite poet has to be.... :shock: can't choose. I love them all but as I said earlier. I love Thomas Hardy, Longfellow and Burns.:) ...