KnightlyAngel09

Hello. Well, I honestly remember feeling like this as well, once upon a time. Honestly, it's a little unsettling how easy it is to relate to this. But I guess, ...

Hello.:) I liked the intensity of this poem. I think it's really difficult to write about really strong emotions so kudos to you for that. Now, I think precisely because ...

Hello.:) First of all, who is your avatar? Must. Stalk. Haha. I love your use of rhythm. It's not often I come across a poem on here with such a ...

Hi.:) You commented on a poem of mine so I thought I'd return the favor. But first of all, welcome to YWS.:) I hope you shall enjoy your stay. This ...

I wish that I could dance with you Beneath the starlit night; Walk upon a silver moonbeam, And bathe ourselves in light. I wish the stardust in our souls Would ...

Banned for being nearly a century old.O_____O

Hello.:) Here I am to review. I like your concept and I think the title adds to the substance of this poem. It makes you see it in the context ...

Hello.:) First of all *follows*. This was an amazing story. Your wording was great. You described emotions so colorfully that this wasn't your cliche romance at all. There's a certain ...

Hello.:) I really liked this poem. It was as if you were painting the world before my eyes as I read it. That's a testament to how vivid your imagery ...

Hi! Sorry if this is a short review as I'm reviewing from my phone. Anyway, I often write in rhyme myself and am really partial to it. As Lily said ...

Hey niteowl.:) I really liked this. I think you captured the fear of many teenagers of not belonging and feeling alone while at the same time packaging it differently so ...

Hello.:) Like the reviewer said above, it did feel as if you were talking to me. So I guess what this poem achieves is a strong persona. Although quite honestly, ...

On a park bench he is sitting, old and weathered by the rain; both the man and wood is branded by life and time’s injurious stains. His gray eyes flicker ...

You will notice that this is a very short story. The reason for this is because this is actually part 1 of a short story I had been working on ...

Hello.:) Alright, I really think this needs a lot of work. I find it lacking in a lot of aspects and I'm really sure you can turn this into something ...