KnightlyAngel09

I am pretty bad at reviewing on punctuation and capitalization but I'm pretty sure that capitalization is needed in the beginnings of most of your lines. Anyway, I think that ...

Okay. Hello.:) First of all, some errors: over ehating I need you to tell me i'm in your heart, To give my happiness a place to start. The 'i'm' should ...

comments are bold.XD the touch of his skin is so warm in my hand... the punctuation doesn't fit too well, it makes the poem flow rather wrong. and yet his ...

The priest speaks with fervor, The priest speaks of God; The priest speaks of leaders Who are blasphemous clods. He spoke about politics, And God's perfect plans; He condemns the ...

This is great. Sonnets are really hard in my opinion. And you did a brilliant job. The rhythm was great, choice of words was also awesome. You paint a really ...

Hello. Well, I thought that there was a strong message and also strong statements in the poem. But I think that your lines are way too long and that the ...

It is really a sad poem. The message I really understand. However, I don't think that the emotions were conveyed too well. I think the first person who reviewed said ...

Hello.:) This poem was great. It was really fresh and the way you use words conjur such a vivid image. The poem also flowed well. Awesome job.:)

Hello. I'm Nixie. I'm kinda new here too. Slightly.XD First of all, I really liked your concept. The suitcase idea is original and I think you painted the picture quite ...

Haloo. I'm Nixie.XD I loved the idea of your poem. It's so modern. Politcal, Economic and Social issues and the line where you say that the leaders are those that ...

Hey. I just wanted to thank everyone who reviewed. 8) MARAMING SALAMAT.:) (translation: Thank you very much.

Oh dear. I must seem like a sad being. No. I did not mean to give out the idea that I am a prisoner in an absolutely unforgiving world. Think ...

This may be slightly rushed since I had to do it for school. --------------------------------------------------- We are not men of steel, you see, We are all weak and breakable; The road ...

I really like this poem. It's free verse and you know how some free verse poems go really overboard with vocabulary to make it sound rather deep? Well, this one ...

I believe he is the most amazing sci-fi writer I've ever read. It's too bad.