KnightlyAngel09

Break through all barriers, Cut through those chains; Stand between anger, Receive the World's pain. Tear down those buildings, Those falsehoods of hope; Capture corruption, Tie Power with rope. Burn ...

This was chilling. There's a real depth to it that grips the reader. It was chilling because there was such a profound sense of helplessness, weakness and exhaustion in the ...

This was great. Your beginning catches attention at once. You used your wrods perfectly too. The way you altered nursery rhymes into cries of despair was really strong. It really ...

Hey, you're a greeter!:) Anyway, this poem was cool. I think that because that it's being straightforwrd just adds so much more to the efficiency of the delivery. It had ...

Hello. Thanks a lot for reviewing. And no, this wasn't about a real person, just an image from the mind.

I don't think it stops obesity or tries to counter obesity for a lot of people. In fact, I think that obese people become more depressed because of seeing picture ...

Aw. Wuthering Heights was awesome! But Jane Eyre was great as well. Can't choose between those two, they're both great. I love Jane Austen.:) But I did not like Sense ...

Well, first of all, your very first line was rather bland. It made your essay sound incredibly academic. Like it was a beginning to a boring lecture in class so ...

Great message and very effective delivery.:) It was great because you presented an issue that is ofetn talked about and written about but presented it in a very original and ...

I really liked this. The idea was so original and the concepts of wonders being incomparable was just awesome. But I do agree that the rhythm is a little off. ...

She is the seed bursting forth from the ground, But stealthy and shy, making no sound; And once you have heard her enchanting tone, Then you'll feel sorry you left ...

I agree with those that posted above me. Write more poetry because this was really good. The emotions were all there and perfectly presented and clear. This was an absolutely ...

Your second stanza was quite brilliant. Also, the message of your poem was really clear and the delivery here is great. All in all, it was a really great read. ...

I am a Christian as well. I am not insulting anyone or trying to oppose religion or anything. I hope I am not too forward. This is not about God, ...

This was really well-written in my opinion. Nothing overboard about the way you wrote about what you felt. The part about cancer was really sad. I partly understand because my ...