KnightlyAngel09

The lines are too long. It gets rather tedious to read if the lines go on to eternity. Oh and too many ellipses. Anyway, those are minor things. I really ...

This is fantastic. I loved the feel of this poem. Darkness, woe and helplessness are all painted vividly. I'm not sure there is something to critic. Okay, a maybe a ...

I think that the redundancy is the style of this poem. So I didn't mind it. But, something does bother me... Way's aways away Okay, I'm not sure if it's ...

Through every storm and shadow, Through thunder and through rain; Let my heart be all-enduring, Numbed to every pain. Though blades may dare to harm it, Though tongues attack with ...

i also think it's neat how you find that rhyming poems are easier to write then free verse, because i used to TOTALLY agree... and i love writing rhyming poems, ...

Assisted suicide is only for people who are terminally ill, not for people with depression. I believe the answer here differs from case to case. For example, if the family ...

I just pray that she returns and blooms unto me... until then I will love and nurture her resilient bud.... Oh my. That was a beautiful review. It was poetic. ...

Your beginning was very plain. It was a question that just wasn't effective. It sounded like a rant but a very not-vivid rant. Sorry, that didn't make sense. It just ...

Okay, first, I'm a she. :lol: Next, thanks a lot for the reviews. Okay, I am aware of the existence of free-verse but I find it harder than a rhyming ...

This was lovely. It was so fresh. Your descriptions were very vivid. I also didn't find any grammar mistakes. Or maybe I overlooked it. Someone filled the valley with fluffy ...

This was a great poem. I just found a few mistakes I'd like to point out first... on road to fortune. Okay, I'm not a grammar specialist but I think ...

Lovely. I loved your Breaking Dawn one and this was hillarious as well. Ima be watching out for Twilight and Eclipse. Nice to bring a luttle humor into the whole ...

I don't think the rhyme sounds forced. Well, except here: I could write a poem for you, say how my heart was torn in two. Anyway, I love this poem. ...

This was a great poem. I have only one problem with this, I think. The rhythm goes off in some parts though. The words don't flow much like here: So ...

In a silence, Okay I'm not sure, because my grammar is pretty bad but should a be the ? I liked this part. It's very symbolic. Rather like people seeing ...