KnightlyAngel09

I saw the movie yesterday and thought that it was really great. Was it a book? I seem to have read the blurb of it already in a past life. ...

Thanks darko, June and Yent.:) You already mentioned "courage". It would be better if you find another word. I agree. I was trying to edit it... hmm. Any Suggestions?

I'm sorry about your friend. This is a beautiful poem. The emotions were all there, all vividly painted. A thousand times I’d find her howling in the night, Pouring her ...

Okay. I wrote a reply and it all disappeared cause the internet died for two seconds. Anyway, here I go again. I hate touchy guys. Especially when you're not at ...

Wow. Really beautiful. Lovely flow. But more than anything, the emotions and message and story in this poem is amazing. You really captured how misunderstood art is by people at ...

Hello.:) I once saw my heart lying on the floor. I think this is a good start but I think that all in all the first eight lines were confusing. ...

Hello.:) And welcome here. Now, to your poem. First, your very first line, it didn't bother me until I got halfway through your poem. I can't take it no more. ...

This is amazing. I find no fault in this, really. There's a tone of desperation and a sudden shift into hope at the end. That was beautiful. But with your ...

I'm not a prose person, seriously, so in advance forgive the lack of skill. I wrote this for a story, originally, and the letter came with it but I lost ...

Hello. Welcome.:) Now, on to your poem. Your opening was rather bland. It really didn't paint your emotions too well. It said how you felt all right but you said ...

Well, all I can suggest is add some punctuation marks. If you think of the future like a broken piece Waiting to be fixed With time against many a life ...

Woah. Hello. I was breezing through this and read you were Filipino. Hello, fellow islander. :wink:

This has concretized the feelings that reverberate around us youngsters. :lol: I absolutely loved this. It was honest and simple and really realistic. No exagerrated feelings of tearing out hearts ...

Okay. I am not sure what this poem is about but I'll take a guess from what I understood and felt in your poem, War? While I read this I ...

Oh dear, this was beautiful. Definitely a gold star. What is knobaly? Typo? This particularly caught me. The repitition was right on amazing. They added so much to the intensity ...