KnightlyAngel09

This was really good. Rather confusing though, I must say. I reread it and tried to connect it to the title. Maybe I'm too dense to understand a connection. Anyway, ...

Quite messy. I've got a terrible case of writer's block. I forced this out. ----------------- Time has overtaken us, 'Tis the price we pay; For sitting still and dreaming dreams, ...

Banned for picking on a chinese superstitious fear when chinese new year is coming soon.

Drawing blood ain't cool. I just got too used to it, I guess that's why I got over the fear of needles thing. Anyway, this is a great poem. I ...

Er... numbers? They're to mark the lines right? Why are they needed. I threw my concentration off. Anyway, I second the lovely poem comment! This really was beautiful. Wonderful choice ...

This was really good. And I think that the event Princess was talking about that should have been there, being watched by the statues, is there. All summarized, it is ...

You may have read this already, I finished it this morning and it was really good.:) The Time Traveller's Wife by Audrey Niffenegger

This is the first part of the first poem I ever wrote. 'Tis the only part I remember. One windy day As I was on my way I wore a ...

Yes, I lost the story. You see, I can't write on the computer so I use paper... And I felt bad wasting good paper on so many drafts so I ...

Great rhyme.:) It was off in a few stanzas though. The grammar mistakes have already been pointed out so there's no need to reiterate. Hmm... I really liked this poem. ...

I agree with the stanzas. It'll make it easier to read. Also the punctuation comment.:) This really had feeling but I think you can make it more vivid. Make the ...

Hmm... not my usual writing style. So I'm not sure about this. ------------------------------------------ Beautiful, Silver, Humongous Birds, That fly with Thunder in their bellies; People look up wit

Hello.:) Slight technicalities. Honestly don't care much about them but a lot of people do so just to improve the strucuture of this: Er... Let's see. Small problem with the ...

Oh, it's by F. Scott Fitzgerald. Okay, now I know why it sounded so familiar.

Hello.:) I think that this is a lovely topic to write about. Rather than just human mishaps you know? So for that, this already has great potential. I think that ...