KnightlyAngel09

Thank you to everyone who has reviewed. Rhyme ~ In the first two stanzas, you used slant rhyme, but in the last two, you used natural rhyme. I think it'd ...

Dear Incognito Temptation, May the best girl win! I shall not permit you to have my Mr. Darcy.XD haha. Kidding. Wait, I'm not kidding. I ain't giving him up. Yep. ...

Let's see. My mother had cancer when I was three. I didn't get to see her for two years which resulted in me being closer to my dad. After a ...

FITZILLIAM DARCY over Cullen. Mr. Darcy totally wins. Edward has no leash on his emotions. And he would kill himself if ever Bella died. Which I find very Romeo and ...

Hello.:) You're kind of new so welcome here. This poem reminded me of speeches about hope. So, the way I underestood this, it is about hope. I really liked this ...

I really liked this. I thought the spaces between the lines were an overkill though. Sorry, I'm OC. Anyway, this reminded me of Emerson's poetry. Some of poems talk about ...

Nice poem. Loved your structure. It was consistent all through out. So congratz on that. I agree with June though, it was forced in some areas. Hmm.. What I got ...

Let not my heart be opened To the perils of the world, To the treachery of Romance, And to sweet, deceitful words. Let my heart be safe within me, Never ...

It was alright. I think though that it lacks in some parts. There wasn't much emotion going on so it made the poem really bland. You said you were inadequate ...

Hey.:) The rhyme scheme here was rather odd. It was different in every stanza. Ok. This review is just really plainly my opinion and others may disagree but I don't ...

Hey. Welcome here.:) I loved the beginning of the poem up until the 'captivates me' line. And then I felt that it got rather bland. The first part had real ...

Great poem. Although I must say I find it odd how all your other stanzas were astronomy stuff then in your final stanza it was all mythology. It threw me ...

Hello.:) And welcome here. Er, first, the repetition was too much. It kills poetry when overused. Anyway, you rhymed quite well. The poem flowed nicely. You used simple vocabulary and ...

This was really rather too short, I think. I mean it works well in some poetry but to me it left a lot of things hanging. Like the emotions aren't ...

I like the end of this poem best.:) All the grammar and punctuation mistakes have been cited already, I belive. Anyway, I think that if you correct that, the flow ...