KnightlyAngel09

This pen writes no longer, It has abandoned its trade; It has gone on vacation, And has let its ink fade. This pen has no stories, No more glorious prose; ...

Behold! Behold the beast for It is the nature's prince. Behold! Behold the creature that makes the unique wince: (Unique? I'm sure you can find a better word for this. ...

Hello.:) And welcome heeere. Pretty intense poetry here. I commend you for making it so vivid. You also expressed well in this poem, expressed identity, I mean. 'Tis one of ...

Hello.:) Ok. Let's start on this. First stanza was rather confusing. The first lines were indifference but it shifted so quickly into warning then luck. I think the ideas are ...

Pin it to a rose? Now that's a nice idea. I haven't gotten to how to give it honestly. I'm still in the convincing myself I should give it stage.:) ...

Hello. Dark. That's what strikes me with this piece first. The thing about dark poetry is often people go too overboard with them. They use too many metaphors and descriptions ...

Hey.:) You've got a rhyme scheme going here but I think your lines are missing or having a syllable or two out of place here and there. Anyway, it needs ...

Beautiful. This very nearly made me shed tears. I have nothing to critique, I believe. First part, absolutley brilliant descriptions of nature. Imagery and personification worked well here. The way ...

Hello and welcome.:) There were some errors on grammar and spelling I noticed but the other reviewers already pointed it out.XD Honesty is a value that is sometimes difficult to ...

This rhymed really well.:) I agree with Sol. This sounded like a fantasy. It reminds me of the feelings from the Music of the Romantic Era. We studied it in ...

Hiya. And welcome here.XD My name is Nixie and I'm not a good reviewer but I shall try. I see no problem with the flow of this poem, honestly. It's ...

Thank you so much Evi. That was a lot of help. I edited it a little, took note of your comments. I haven't edited the 2nd stanza yet though but ...

Hello and welcome here.:) I'm Nixie and I shall review this.XD This was a great piece. I love how it keeps you wondering until the very end. It almost seems ...

Hello.:) First thing I noticed with this is the exclamation points. I think tht it's overdone. It destroys the feel of this poem. I felt that the first part of ...

This was really good. The rhythm also really worked well with this poem. It gave it an almost desperate voice. Honestly, I see nothing wrong with this poem. Rhythm is ...