KnightlyAngel09

I love this poem. In this world of darkness In this world of pain there is one who is always here for us. it is hatred (I feel like this ...

THis was absolutely lovely. My only problem was the rhymes sounded forced. Although I wouldn't drop your rhyme scheme for anything. The rhyme scheme was restricting but it added to ...

Name: Nixie Age: 15, turning 16 on May. Fav book && YES ONE: LES MISERABLES. Fav author: Jane Austen Fav food: uh... meat. Fav store: Fully Booked. Bookstore. haha.:) Fav ...

To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee. And you'll be okay with anything by Ernest Hemingway. I suggest A Farewell to Arms.

I give you one nightmare, a mirage and a daydream :arrow: in that order. (three poems following three dreams that occured to me in the past) 1. Windmills Edge I ...

I do not write in free verse. This will need quite a lot of help. ---------------------------------------------------- Perhaps a few years from now, I will see you, And I'll say that ...

Pretenses. [A poetry] Even if you kiss me, it won't feel so right. (This is just a suggestion but 'it wouldn't feel right' sounds better) Even if you hug me, ...

I have a facebook.O.O oh, yeah, this is random but it's trivia. The youngest billionare in the world is 23 and he's the dude who invented facebook. Not sure but ...

Hello. I could lose myself in her pretty blue eyes like a sailor on the sea, (a sailor in like a bird in the sky. Sorry that was quite a ...

Hello.:) Wait, do you mean reckless? or is Recklass really a word? "These recklass nights desire to run from confusion." THe first line is a little confusing. The night is ...

Oh, I just remembered another romance that was pretty good. It's also very original. No cliched plots or anything. The Time Traveller's Wife.:)

Er... I edited the typo. Thanks to all who reviewed.

HeLLo.:) As to your poetry, usage of words, imagery, metaphors and flow, I have no problems. It's all absolutely beautiful. But the spaces between the lines are an overkill. Chnage ...

No, I don't think I'm the same person I was when I was twelve Evi. Just kidding. Yes, you have a point there. I am my 12 year-old self except ...

Uhm... Nicholas Sparks has okay plots when it comes to romance but his writing style is weird. But check his books out anyway. Dear John wasn't too bad. Captain Corelli's ...