KnightlyAngel09

Cool. The song is from the Fray right? I've honestly never heard of a Villanelle before. Interesting structure. I like the concept behind this poem. There's also some hint of ...

Hello.:) Uhm, first, rhythm and flow was very choppy. Although I don't think that that's too major an issue if you get the message across fine. It's just that often ...

Oh my, John Donne. I love his poem titled 'The Anniversary'. Brilliant word usage. I don't know how you do it. Sorry, this isn't a reivew but all I have ...

Yeah. His Dark Materials would be perfect. They're not exactly light but they're quite easy to read. Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander. First book in the series is called ...

Hi. Punctuation needs help, comrade. Unforunately, I have the same problem with my writing. Though I'm quite sure that's too many commas. Anyway, I really liked this poem. Although I ...

What foolish hope I nurture, As fool's hope nurtures me; And we watch over each other, Foolish hope and me. I smile when I am broken, For hope shall mend ...

Hey.:) Here's your review. Kalyug The skies darken, As the sun dies. Up in the heavens, The angels cry. The earth burns, In the flames of hell. This day would ...

Percy Jackson and the Olympians by Rick Riordan Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander Anything Jane Austen but I highly recommend Pride and Prejudice, and Persuasion.:)

For your math teacher. haha. I'd love to send this as a Valentine's gift for moi Algebra teacher as well.:) Anyway, to review this poem: perfect swear words! Oh and ...

I liked this.:) It's a really simple and vivid poem. Rhythm faltered from time to time, honestly. First in the first stanza and also in the last two lines of ...

It is you I have loved, Despite all your wrongs; When all would speak harsh, I sang you a song. It is you I have loved, Long and in vain; ...

I love this.:) However, I still think it needs a few things. The second stanza isn't very vivid. It's also a really cliche way to put the situation. Perhaps present ...

Lovely poem. I shall forever admire your ability to put the core issues of society into great poetry. This was a great and very original concept to write about. It ...

Thanks to those who reviewed. I edited the shalls... Thank you Jack for that. What you said was true. haha. Will makes it more real. Thank you Jon as well, ...

And there it was found. A once strangled hope cried out, I now know I cannot live without; For from your eyes spirits sprout, What else is there to write ...