KnightlyAngel09

Wow. You improved it. Everything seems to be ok now except for the ending. The question seems rather out of place. I love how you put the things that are ...

I absolutely adore this poem. Bashful boys must read this and learn a lesson from it. It simmers with wisdom. This was also rather comical and at the same time ...

Argument in the form of a question: Would you prefer to see your parents together, at each other throats each night? Or See them apart but quite peaceful? Apart please. ...

Yes they do. You can't erase the fact that the death penalty has had some advantageous effects in certain countries. Though governing by fear may be perilous, it works in ...

Every word he writes, Pulsates with life; Every line on paper, A grand masterpiece. Dramatic, Tear-jerking, gut-wrenching Monologues tie heartstrings, Emotions ensnare your soul; Words captivate you.

Hello.:) I love you, even more than me. I love you, Cant you see? This isn't a very good beginning. It's so cliche that it makes a really weak opening. ...

Hello. Oh, we have the same signature. The Latin part at least. Slight typo on the second to the last line. I believe you mean savior and not savoir. Anyway, ...

I was going to suggest Percy Jackson but I see you've already got that on your list. Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander. First book is called The Book of ...

10/10 beacuse it RHYMES! Wait minus one. WTF... oh ForeverThrenody is one word. Okay. 10/10.

8/10 because I got stoned watching the eyes move.O.O

Hello. Welcome to the site.:) Punctuation and Capitalization needed. It'll help the flow of this poem. I admire your word usage and imagery. Overall, it creates a powerful effect on ...

9/10 Because I only like cookies 9 out of 10 times.:)

No. Definitely not cookie dough. Ice cream I love but not cookie dough. TPBM skateboards. ha. I knew it!

Every word I write is laced with you? Hmm... True, perhaps. However, I daydream to save myself so most of my works are daydreams but still you know... Laced with ...

Grand poem once again, comrade. That's called assonace isn't it? The style you used in the last two lines of each stanza? Absolutely lovely. It's amazing when words fit perfectly ...