KnightlyAngel09

Hello. Wow, the eyes look amazing! I absolutely love them. The lips do look a little weird, I think. Another problem I see is the proportions. The head looks too ...

Hello. Welcome to YWS. Er... First, did you really mean to post this in the Dramatic poetry section? There are various sections for prose works, you see. Perhaps when you ...

hello. The end is my favorite part. It's always lovely when the end of a poem is brilliant. Hmm... First, I think your rhyme restricts you. In the first stanza, ...

I really love this. It's something one can relate to, especially one who is leaving. I think it was also brilliantly written. It reminded me of an Austen heroine, Fanny ...

This is an excellent poem. I'm wondering about the second to the last stanza though. Are you sure that that should really read 'This seasons' or 'This season's'? Anyway, an ...

Hello.:) This poem strikes me as something like a teen angst poem. First: The beginning of your poem is very weak. The start of the poem needs something in it ...

I thought I'd thank you for all the wonderful reviews you've given me. Eh... Forgive me, I do not review well. Come to us who call to thee, Come to ...

You puzzle me, You; Whose mind I can turn every angle, Caress every corner And still meet a dead end. Forever shall I turn your mind in vain, Turning full ...

Quite good, though improvements can be made in the rhyme of this poem. The start flows alright but it doesn't flow as well after the first 4 lines. Excellent though ...

Hello. This is quite an interesting poem. The flow is really choppy in the first stanza. It's either you made the line breaks in the wrong places, the lines are ...

I love the first, third and fourth photos. Specially the fourth. The blurry reflection on the water is great. On your last picture, perhaps you should crop the partial duck ...

My tiny screen cannot contain this huge flower so I was only able to view it section by section. I love the way you focused this. The background is really ...

I agree, the model is beautiful but there's something about her pose that just doesn't fit the background and the wording. She looks rather terrified and cold to me which ...

You use the most interesting wording. It's very new and quite original. It doesn't echo the imagery of any other poets and still it gives a very vivid picture. Perhaps ...

This is quite a literary analysis. This is the type that criticizes the literary piece by it's characters, right? or is this just a character analysis. I'm quite unsure. I'm ...